身为一名到岗不久的老师,我们要在教学中快速成长,教学反思能很好的记录下我们的课堂经验,那么大家知道正规的教学反思怎么写吗?这次漂亮的小编为您带来了刷子李教案教学反思9篇,希望能够给予您一些参考与帮助。
《刷子李》是人教版小学五年级下册第七组课文中的第二篇课文,选自冯骥才的《俗世奇人》。这是一篇略读课文,课文以“刷子李”高超的技艺为话题,借一件极富戏剧性的小事窥见人物的大本领,大智慧。本文生动搞笑,故事一波三折,人物形象富有传奇色彩,是一篇艺术性和趣味性都较强的`文章,很容易吸引学生阅读。
我在教学中紧紧抓住孩子们的心,从而学习作者描述人物的方法呢?课中紧紧抓住一个“奇”字,让学生在“读”中晓“奇”,在“议”中悟“奇”,从种种“奇”中感悟刷子李的技艺高超。如,在引导学生感悟“刷子李”是一“奇”人时,引导学生从以下方面品味——“规矩奇”、“动作奇”、“效果奇”各体此刻哪些方面?
我把本课教学定为两大板块:聚焦文本资料,从细节描述中感知“技艺高超”;聚焦表达形式,在揣摩曹小三内心活动中感知“一波三折”。我始终思考学生的需要,立足于学生的发展,对教学资料进行了调整和取舍,重点突出,条理清晰,学生学得兴趣盎然。这些收获,使我意识到:心里有文本,眼里有学生。这样的教学设计就应是可行的、有效的。
如果我们在精讲课文中不敢放弃自己的主导地位,那我们可以在自读课文中试一试:自读课文,本来就是要求以学生自读自悟为主。为此,我们可以利用自读课文的特点,将文本教学上成“一课一得”:在一篇文章当中,关注一个焦点可以是一个重要知识点或者阅读点,把课上成“阅读指导课”“阅读欣赏课”等等。不贪多,要的是“一课一得”,让学生这节课能有所收获就够了。让学生在一篇课文当中获得一个方面的知识或者技能,总比我们“眉毛胡子一把抓”要来得好一些。
这篇课文,写法上有许多巧妙的地方,例如标题的妙,场景的妙,悬念设置的妙,黑衣的妙,白点的妙,尤其是它的“侧面描写”:在本篇课文描写刷子李技艺精湛的过程中,是用曹小三其人的观察和情感变化来进行描述和衬托的。尤其是当曹小三发现白点的时候,内心的感受极其复杂,文章的描写也跌宕起伏。这正是文章描写方法的独到之处。我们可以引导学生发现侧面描写的妙处,从中领悟这种巧妙的写作方法。我们在教学中可以抓住描写的关键词语,在进行教学之后,将本节课的重点放在用“果然悠然居然竟然”这四个情节连接词语,来指导学生进行一段描写,提高学生写作能力,培养学生利用关键词语进行布局谋篇的能力。
一、以学定教,突显学生主体地位:
我们要追求真实有效的教学,必须把学生放在主体地位,从学生的实际出发。许多老师常常把学生的学习起点设为“零”,在没有考证学情的情况下,盲目地按照既定的教学思路开展学习活动,往往达不到预期的效果。学习每一篇课文前,我们得了解学生的兴趣点、知识的盲点、断点、空白点在哪里,这样对症下药,才能事半功倍。学习《刷子李》这篇课文,我也将学习时间还给学生,让学生在充分阅读课文的基础上,充分地交流:文中的刷子李给你留下了怎样的印象?在学生的交流中,我随机提炼出一些重要的信息:刷子李着装奇特、规矩奇怪、技艺高超。并随机板书。这些信息有些是显性的,有些是隐性的,教师的作用是当学生自己能学懂的时候,放手让他们自己学懂;当学生感到困难时,适当地加以指导。这些才能真正体现学生的主体地位,让学生感受到学习的乐趣。
二、品味“高超”,紧扣略读课文目标:
这篇课文前的一段提示语告诉我们,学习这篇文章的主要目标是“想想刷子李的高超技艺表现在哪里”“课文是怎样写出他的技艺高超的”。研读目标一,课文主要是通过两个方面“刷墙时的情景”和“刷墙后的效果”来表现刷子李的技艺高超。因此,在交流研读时,我紧扣目标,采用多种形式展开教学。“刷墙时的情景”在学生品读重点语段后,让学生抓关键词,想象当时的情景,来细心品悟。而学习“刷墙后的效果”则让学生罗列三个重点语句,在自由读,指名读的基础上,让学生抓住关键词来谈自己的感受。学生有的放矢,学得认真投入,读得入情入境,达到预期目标。
三、探讨“曹小三”,落实写作方法:
这篇课文写作方法独特,作家特地安排了“曹小三”这个人物来侧面烘托刷子李的高超技艺。于是,从“情景”、“效果”这两个正面感受刷子李的高超技艺后,我抛出了一个问题:“作者为什么还要安排曹小三呢?是不是多余的呢?”带着这个问题,学生再去浏览课文,划出曹小三的相关语句,填一填描写他心理活动的词语,学生发现作者安排“曹小三”这个人物有着特殊的含义,对主要人物起衬托作用,这样文章的写作手法也就表现出来了,实现了人文性与工具性的统一。
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学生对课后三个问题的精彩交流,也是超乎我的预想的。尤其是第二处问题(第一课时:为什么凡卡给爷爷写信乞求爷爷带他回家?第二课时:多数同学认为凡卡受尽折磨、苦不堪言,生不如死,但是有一个同学却认为凡卡很坚强,你认为凡卡到底有没有坚强?)的交流,具有“史无前例”的突破!多数孩子一开始都认为凡卡的学徒生活“再也受不住了!”“我就要死了!”“只有死路一条了!”“没有指望了,连狗都不如!”……只看到凡卡悲惨遭遇的一面,却没有发现凡卡骨子里还隐藏着坚强的另一面!不少人在可怜凡卡的同时,唾骂的是鞋店的老板、老板娘、几个伙计,怪罪的是黑暗深重的资本主义社会。这课的教学,我没有引导学生去同情凡卡,也没有引导学生去唾骂和怪罪,学生的交流中已经蕴含这些了,我为何还要再去强化这些呢!因为这些都不能触动我和学生的心弦,不能撞击我和学生的心灵!
凡卡在如此险恶的环境中,始终保持着对自由幸福生活的向往,始终坚信能够回到爷爷身边;在经受折磨和屈辱之后,凡卡顽强地挺过来了;虽然凡卡的忍受力达到了极限,甚至想到了死,但是他最终还是选择了生存,他没有自暴自弃!这就是凡卡的坚强!这就\\是震撼人心的坚强!我和学生被凡卡的坚强感动着,不断地感动着……
有人说,“一堂好的语文课,存在三种境界:人在课中、课在人中,这是第一种佳境;人如其课、课如其人,这是第二种佳境;人即是课、课即是人,这是第三种佳境。境界越高,课的痕迹越淡,终至无痕。因此,课的最高境界乃是无课。我在设计上下了功夫。从字词的预热、环境的把握、情节的切入、语言的品味、人物的解读到文本的感悟与拓展,无不留下我精心设计的心血。我先是熟读文本,以至成诵。其间,发现了三个可以带动全文教学的点:一是文中用了52个“一”。细品之,我把它概括为“一个绰号藏奇绝”、“一个传说话奇绝”、“一段实录证奇绝”、“一袭黑衣衬奇绝”、“一手绝活写奇绝”、“一番教诲表奇绝”;二是文中几个跟黑衣白点的中心情节密切相关的几个带“然”的词:“果然”──“居然”──“竟然”──“忽然”,另外,“悠然”这个词也能充分体现人物的性格和境界;三是人物的双重解读,即人生意义上的人物解读和文化意义上的人物解读。
在设置教学环节时,我时刻谨记“以生为本”,“贴着学生教”,一切的教学环节都以学生的学情为设计的中国。
整体教学设计便基于此展开。其中,选择以曹小三的口吻来复述的方法以期达到一石三鸟的效果:进一步领会情节一波三折之魅力;深刻感受曹小三心理之变化、刷子李之奇绝;在学生的个性解读中深入体会本色、津味之语言特色。然而,静心思之,这堂课在“三个维度”──温度(教师情感的温热度)、广度(在主题的范围内旁延扩展)、深度(语文性、情感性和思想性的深刻和恒久)的体现上,明显地感到了广度和深度的不足!我也曾想用结尾的人物系列来弥补这一点,然而正如专家点评,这“只是对课文的一个延伸”,“给课堂起到水到渠成的作用,让课堂就此结束”,“未关注刷子李们的苦难生活”。是的,课堂因此没有生命的超级震撼力,也就没有好课应有的高度而流于平庸!拓宽备课视野,深化文本处理和加强课堂的厚重感是我急需补的课程!
此外,语言赏析还不够地道,这也是我备课时深感困惑的地方,如何让学生深刻体会文本津味语言特色,从而深刻解读带有天津烙印的刷子李的生命形态,挖掘人物背后的厚重的民俗文化意蕴。对这一点,我自觉只做到了蜻蜓点水。
1、学习掌握6个生字;学会两个轻声“包袱、师傅”;学习一个多音字“和”以及文章的新词。
2、在默读课文的基础上提炼内容,感情朗读相关句子。
3、通过曹小三跟随师傅学艺的过程,亲历亲闻,感受刷子李技术高超,一手绝活,以及故事的跌宕起伏,体会侧面描写和“一波三折”的写作手法。
一、聊《俗世奇人》
1、书本《俗世奇人》
2、简介:
①《俗世奇人》是著名作家冯骥才创作的同名小说集。全书由19个短篇小说连缀构成,各篇文字极精短。
②书中所讲之事,又多以清末民初天津卫市井生活为背景,每篇专讲一个传奇人物生平事迹,素材均收集于长期流传津门的民间传说,人物之奇特闻所未闻,故事之精妙叹为观止。
二、揭示课题:刷子李
1、引出刷子李。
2、聊刷子李
①从名字中你明白了哪些信息?
②为什么叫他“刷子李”?
【他姓李,刷墙的本领高超。】
③师总结:
是的。在天津卫这个地方,某一行有绝活的人,人们用他的行当加姓称呼他。 比如在天津,有个姓张的,泥人捏得特别好,就叫他——
还是在天津,有个姓刘的风筝做得特别好,就叫他——
比如在天津,有个叫唐老师的书教得特别好,就叫他——
(油漆张?)
三、积累新词、学习生字
1、生字填写——活学活用(一)。
刷子李刷(浆)时,必穿一身黑,干活前,先把装有黑衣黑裤黑鞋的包(袱)打开并穿上,干完活绝没有一个白点。曹小三第一次跟在师(傅)刷子李(屁)股后面做事,发现了一个白点,以为师傅露(陷)了,以为他的名气有(诈),但事实并非如此。
2、检查反馈:根据意思写词语:
刷浆、半信半疑、派头十足、悠然、鼓点、天衣无缝、威严、露馅、诈、难堪、发怔、匀匀实实
3、指导读音两个轻声:包袱、师傅
4、多音字“和”:和着琴音
四、填写刷子李名片,感受技术高超
1、填写刷子李的名片
师:名片是为了推销自己,为了让别人在极短的时间认识自己。所以在这个小小的纸上应该写最关键、最有用的信息。
仔仔细细默读课文,联系全文,用文中的词语或自己概括的词语填一填。
2、交流简介,聚焦问题。
①反馈预设:美术家、音乐家、能工巧匠、技艺高超、奇人一个、一手绝活? ②问题聚焦:奇在哪里?高超在哪?
③句子展示:学生读,老师点评。
④积累背诵(活学活用二):
只见师傅的手臂悠然摆来,悠然摆去,如同伴着鼓点,和着琴音,每一摆刷,那长长的带浆的毛刷便在墙面啪地清脆二响,极是好听。啪啪声里,一道道浆,衔接得天衣无缝,刷过去的墙面,真好比平平整整打开一面雪白的屏障。
⑤一手绝活、技艺高超、俗世奇人(总结、板书)
五、写作手法感悟、拓展延伸
1、侧面描写(正面描写)
师:为了写出刷子李的技艺高超,他的奇,作者冯骥才派了一个人来见证、说明,这种写法叫“侧面衬托”。
2、比如说:你外面穿了一件黑色或者灰色的衣服,里面配一件白色衬衫,这就把你整个脸蛋都衬托出来了,都烘托出来了。
3、再比如说:
写武松的勇猛我们可以用?衬托;
《草船借箭》学过吧,我们写诸葛亮的'足智多谋,我们可以用?来衬托。
再回忆我们去年学过的《慈母情深》,写母亲工作的辛苦我们可以用厂房?来烘托。
4、一波三折(比喻事情进行中意外的变化很多)
①找到文章含有“然”字的句子。
师:的确,曹小三这个人物的出现让我们觉得故事的跌宕起伏。请同学们找出文中含有“然”字的6处句子,体会体会故事的跌宕起伏。
②读句子,简单交流,体会写法。
③一波三折的叙事,引人入胜──起初,徒弟是“半信半疑”,但大半天下来,居然连一个芝麻大的粉点也没发现,他真觉得这身黑色的衣服有种神圣不可侵犯的威严。正当徒弟对师傅佩服得五体投地时,却突然发现“刷子李”裤子上有一个白点:师傅那如山般的形象轰然倒去。不料“刷子李”最后揭开谜底:那白点原来是黑裤烧了个小洞造成的,使“刷子李”的“奇”得到了一次次的渲染。
4、有效拓展(课后作业)
△备注:(细节描写、对比的写法)
注重细节描写,塑造人物个性──文中“刷子李”的黑衣黑裤,刷墙时娴熟的动作,还有那个让人吃了一惊的白点等细节描写都使“刷子李”这个人物活了,神了。
采用对比手法,烘托人物形象──曹小三对师傅“半信半疑”的态度和主人公“艺高胆大”的自信进行对比,充分表达了作者对“刷子李”这个具有超凡技艺的“奇人”由衷的赞叹和肯定。
六、总结提升、链接提升
1、总结出示对联:(上联)如同仙境,刷板显功底
(下联)黑衣无瑕,绝活传真谛
(横批)俗世奇人
2、课后作业:
①自己编一个小故事,简单尝试运用“一波三折”的写法。
②阅读链接:《俗世奇人》之泥人张、快手刘、张大力、冯五爷。
附:板书设计
刷子李
技艺高超俗世奇人
侧面烘托一波三折
(一)授与学的思考
课堂,短短的几分钟如何让学生的有所获、有所得?
学生是学习的主体,这话的确不假,甚至是千真万确的至理名言。然而老师的导和引毕竟是一个前提,老师的定向和定位直接导致学生的自主性的发挥。
所以备课,老师的思考轨迹尤为重要,甚至一些根本性的东西就在这里埋下了伏笔。 授什么,引什么,学生就会自主地学到什么,毕竟在五年级这个年段,学生的主体地位并不是绝对的,我始终相信老师具有至关重要的作用,即指明灯,指路人,一旦方向错了,即使可以殊途同归,那其间的不少冤枉路不是三言两语能够说清道明的。
拿到《刷子李》这篇略读课文,首先要定位,它处于第五单元的人物描写组,并且要学生学会如何写人。所以在传授的过程中唯有抓住线索让学生真正领悟两种写人的手法,可谓是深谙于心。
细读文本是一位老师必须具备的基本功。自认为文本中几个带“然”字的词语被抓住是一个命脉的线索,这对于学生阅读文本,掌握“一波三折”的写法那是水到渠成。如果有足够的时间进行拓展,那更是精益求精,好上加好。
(二)赛课展示的是什么
赛课,要展示的是什么?花里胡哨的东西似乎已经不能适应当前的语文教学。所以在
开课前的谈话《俗世奇人》、课文词语的根据意思写词语以及后面重点段落的背诵都是一一落到了“语言”、“文字”的实处。只有这样才能扎实学生的基本功,才能真正做到日积月累、厚积薄发。
(三)时间的分配以及课堂的淡定
一堂课,除了学生的学有所得,老师的演绎不可忽视。
淡定,课堂的驾驭能力足可以看出一个老师的功底。
在35分钟的时间内,没想到最后一个对联环节还是没有展示出来,颇有遗憾。
综上,还是应验了老教师的一些训导:要学会反思,当写完这些文字的时候,真正感到思考带来的魅力,作为老师,这应该是一门必修课,无论有多忙,反思比写教案更为重要。是矣!
语文是一门搞笑的学科,因为语文课文包含了各种搞笑的知识。其中刷子李就是我们喜欢的一篇课文。在那里,我们学大语文教师,就针对课文的学习,为大家总结出来了,刷子李教学反思。
本课是一篇略读课文,紧紧抓住课前阅读提示进行组织教学的,“熟读课文,想想‘刷子李’的技艺高超表此刻哪儿,作家冯骥才又是怎样写出他技艺高超的。再把描述最精彩的句子找出来,读一读,体会一下表达的效果。”
在熟读课文的基础上,学生很快地找出了第5自然段,作者透过动作和效果描述,较好的表现了刷子李高超的技艺。学生透过再三再四地读和体会揣摩,理解了刷子李粉刷墙壁如艺术创作,艺术表演一样,那样出神入化、娴熟的技艺,令人惊叹,令人称奇道妙。
于是,从“情景”、“效果”这两个正面感受刷子李的高超技艺后,我抛出了一个问题:“作者为什么还要安排曹小三呢是不是剩余的呢”带着这个问题,学生再去浏览课文,划出曹小三的相关语句,填一填描述他心理活动的词语,学生发现作者安排“曹小三”这个人物有着特殊的含义,对主要人物起衬托作用,穿针引线和见证者的作用,这样文章的写作手法也就表现出来了,实现了人文性与工具性的统一。
刷子李教学反思,在上面文章中我已经为大家带来了分析整理。期望你在学习语文课文的时候,参考利用我们学大专家总结的知识,记忆更多的知识点。
今天上午,我和学生共同学习了《刷子李》这篇课文,上课的时候我内心觉得很充实,因为学生听得很认真,回答问题也很积极。
这篇文章的作者是冯骥才,课文描写了一个刷墙师傅高超的。技艺,内容简单易懂。刷子李刷浆的时候,总是会穿一套黑衣服。而且还给自己立下规矩:只要身上有白点,白刷不要钱。
这是篇略读课文,我引导学生紧扣文前导读来阅读本篇课文,“刷子李”技艺高超表现在哪里?学生准确地找到了“但刷子划过屋顶,立时匀匀实实一道白,白得透亮,白得清爽。”等相关句子。
最后我把教学的重点放在了引导孩子做人的教育上,其实语文教学重点就是引导孩子在日常生活中如何做人做事,所以我把一大部分时间放在最后的谈论环节,你认为刷子李为什么会成功?
立马学生的热情倍涨,他们分析出了种种原因。一是他比较看重真本事,因为他告诉曹小三说“好好学本事吧。”二是他很自信,他告诉所有人如果他的黑衣服上沾上了白点,他就不要一分钱,这样一来很多家粉刷房子都会找他,如果有白点就不用掏钱了。三是他肯定很刻苦,我们现实生活中看到过很多粉刷匠,他们的衣服上都是一个一个的小白点,而刷子李刷完一整套房子,黑衣服上一个白点也没有,就说明他的功夫深,他能做得这么好肯定是下了很多功夫的,所以这样他也会成功。四是他心态很好,刷墙的时候手臂摆来摆去,悠然自得,在刷墙时他的心里一定很宁静,开心,心情很放松,所以才会做得这么好。
在逐渐地分析中,学生明白了一个成功人士应该具备的本质,我想那些想成功的孩子,日后一定会潜移默化地向刷子李学习的。
点评:面对这样简单易懂的课文,实在没有必要具体分析那么多,我觉得谭老师这样的教法更切合生活的实际,学生会更喜欢。